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Reviews for Fading away

By : Akikazehana

From kmoaton on March 20, 2011
Wow! I knew this was coming but the way you portrayed it was hot and sensitive and tender! This story is so wonderful! Keep up the good work!
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From ladykaa28 on March 20, 2011
I have been reading this from the beginning and I'm just now getting the chance to review. I'm happy that they are finally getting the chance to find a common ground, but how long will it last? Please say that they will have at least 50-75 good years together
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From LordYouko on March 19, 2011
I love the characterization in your story, mainly of Inuyasha. It is really very beautigul but the story seems...a little disconnected, somehow. You have built the atmosphere very well - the slightly melancholy, dreamy kind of feeling, still very realistic somehow, but the scene with Inuyasha turning human, and what happened after didn't quite gel according to me. But I love this story. I check daily for updates so please do continue.
-LordYouko
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From ajj77sunhawk on March 19, 2011
meh! dont worry about it, life happens, we grow and learn, adn move on. Me I just choose to have fun. Lol I had a flash of Chibi Inuyasha glomping Sesshy :) Cute. Gah Sessahy is thick... short chappie :( Continue fast. Please and thank you.
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From Pumpkinpi on March 19, 2011
Awwwww, Sesshoumaru didn't want to let him go, of course Inuyasha had to tease him a bit by treating him like a sad puppy:-) They have gotten so close and now although he may not say it out loud Sesshoumaru is terrified of losing him and being all alone! Which is ironic since he cliamed to be a loner in the past (although he really wasn't since he always had someone hanging out with him:-) I wonder how long Inuyasha has been sick like this and how long he has suffered alone...poor thing? At least he won't be alone any more he finally has his big brother to watch his back as it should have always been. I wonder where Inuyasha went for all that time? Could guess but probably will be wrong:-) Love it look forward to more!!!X
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From ardentes on March 18, 2011
I haven't read such a take on Inuyasha being frail in modern times before. I really enjoyed this story. I like how Sesshomaru is trying to build up a relationship with Inuyasha but it is taking a while. I am very curious what in the world you are referring to towards the end of the chapter. How is he trying to escape fate? I hate seeing characters unhealthy but it makes for an interesting story and so far I enjoy this story despite Inuyasha not being fully healthy. I am really curious what will happen next and I hope you will write more soon. Good luck with the next chapter!
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From SoSickOfNyQuil on March 18, 2011
Lol, I learned a new word: Amelioration, now I just have to look it up.
I have to say I rather like how this is Sesshouamru-centric and how you don't so much see his emotional change physically but more so mentally. I get the impression that he's the same emotionless, cold businessman on the outside but inside I see a different individual.
I'm also curious as to where InuYasha has gone =3
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From ladytokyo on March 17, 2011
Oh just to say I'm happy with the tone of this fic yes so many authors choose to same outlook and to a point where I feel that I'm reading the same plot line over and over again. Some how this feels real there's not a battle with swords or other youkai it's just the two of them dealing the modern world. It' just has a different vibe and one that I'm excited to read on. I have my favorite author and a few review to this but I can say that you are going up on my list to look out for and yes it's your fault I was late. that was rather naughty of me some many fic but sometimes there are some you can't wait to read and has to be done right then and there. lol
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From ajj77sunhawk on March 17, 2011
**Bows. I apologoze, I am a big kid and heart and prone to chlidishness when things impact me as anyone. I reacted cause I got emotionally hooked an it was a scary thought. It a real original and good concept that you had, and I was kndda being funny. Sincerely apologize if you did not see the joke in it. The concept is excellent and it would not cause me to stop reading - just get emotional. Now that I know how you feel I will pull back my childishness. *bows again. Very sorry if you found it in appropriate Hope you accept my apology. That said however, I am well aware that everyone dies, but I read fiction for entertainment and escapism. I love angst as long as the ending is happy. Death fics, especially those that are emotionally hooking, really depress me, its too much like real life and so yes I dont read them. That is why I am seriously asking for a warning if the fic is gonna end in main charac death, I am not asking you to change the plot or anything, it is your story. I am asking for a warning - BECAUSE the story is good enough to impact on me, and some level of Impact I prfer to avoid. I am the kind of prsn who flips to the back of a book, to make sure he person I like is alive before buying the book. I hope I have explained my self better.
On a diferent note, I love the statement "Am I a gardner for a Hanyou." lol can sooo see sesshy saying that.
No hard feeling I hope, All the best
SunHawk
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From ajj77sunhawk on March 17, 2011
Bash! Do that to my poor Inu!!! Bish!!! Splat!! **Dumps ice water all over naughty bunny (Momiji FB) Grrrr... you better fix him!!! Oh please tell me if this is a death fic.. I dont read those sorry.
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From SoSickOfNyQuil on March 17, 2011
....Oh my gosh...this is the first time that an InuYasha fanfiction has completely surprised and threw in a whole new idea. You are brilliant! Nobody (that I have read at least) has gone into what living for hundreds of years would do to the human side of InuYasha I think we all just assumed that it would age at the same pace as his hanyou self. Now I have this image ingrained in my mind of another Dorian Grey. He's young physically but you see his portrait and know his true age. Of course with InuYasha's case in his normal form you notice his seeming fragility and how his body has taken it's case of 'double aging'. It's unbelievable, oh my goodness I am...speechless. I just don't know what to say, what to think, and yet there's so much I want to say, want to ask, all the questions that jump out at me now that this new discovery has been made.
Also it's interesting, in Sesshoumaru's favorite novel that InuYasha has written it's mentioned that the elder brother is written rather in the context of having no emotions, no feelings, I guess in that way it makes it harder to understand him and easier to hate him or be frustrated with him, whereas the younger is portrayed as someone with feelings that others can relate to. what's so interesting to me is that the way InuYasha has written the older brother, InuYasha's character is almost portrayed in the same way. This story, although not written in anyone's specific POV, is more Sesshoumaru-centric than InuYasha-centric as far as emotions go. InuYasha is this unreadable, impassive, lifeless being that's untouched by outsiders but with Sesshoumaru we see his inner conflict, are privy to his thoughts, his habits, his needs and wants.
I think this has become my new favorite story.
I have to say also I'm rather scared myself of what InuYasha looks like on the night of the new moon. And the bitterness that Sesshoumaru sees, is it possible that it's maybe envy of the fact that InuYasha knows that he's dying, maybe sooner than Sesshoumaru actually thinks and while before he was just waiting out his last days now he has his brother back in his life and he's not trying to kill him but actually be family to him and it's going to be snatched away...ARGH OMG this is so much to take in!!
I am in absolute awe of you, I truly cannot wait for the next chapter of this
*bows* (_ _)
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From ladytokyo on March 16, 2011
I just wanted to let you know that because of you I was late to work and I had to read Chapter 6 before I left or I would have had to wait 8 hours to read it. 2 I'm extreamly happy to come home to another chapter. What can I say you darn well know that I love this chapter!
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From Vyper on March 16, 2011
I wish Inuyasha wasn't being so stubborn with Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru is trying so hard to be there for his brother and Inuyasha keeps pushing him away. I hope that Inuyasha doesn't leave for long or that Sesshoumaru could go with him. I also wonder if there is a way to make Inuyasha live longer. Perhaps Sesshoumarau has a spell or something. I also hope that Sesshoumaru can get Inuyasha to eat more.
This almost seems like a dark fic with Inuyasha slowly dying. It really is a sad story so far although I do love it.
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From kmoaton on March 16, 2011
You are slowly breaking my heart! Great chapters and I look forward to more!
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From midnightsweet on March 16, 2011
don't know what to say
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