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  • From jdbbrz27 on November 22, 2010
    That was riviting and wow different. I hope Kagura survives and is not the worse for wear for her protection of little Inuyasha she deserves a medal. And wow an evil inside Manten that one I did not see at all but quite the twist can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From kougaslover on November 22, 2010
    Oh no, I really like Kagura in this one. Hopefully it is nothing too serious that she won't recover from. And, I must say, I love the direction this story is taking. Sesshomaru's almost instinctive attraction to Inuyasha is sweet, and I can't wait to see how their relationship unfolds. Excellent job as always!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on November 21, 2010
    Oh wow that was just so touching and sweetly wonderful. I loved that Jinenji wanted to claim Inuyasha as a little brother which means that no matter what happens the two will always be there for each other in times of stress and need. And the possessiveness and jealousy of Sesshomaru main I loved that it was absolutely priceless and so well I hate to say it but romantically sweet at least in this type of circumstance and it was written quite beautifully. I can't wait to read the courting of little innocent Inuyasha it doesn't matter that he's been raped and abused in the past he is still an innocent when it comes to love and being cared for and loved by another. It also should be really interesting to find out where he comes from and why he was abandoned I mean who abandone such a sweet adorable child like him just so fascinating I'll be waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - autumn on November 21, 2010
    I check for updates every hour on the hour - stop teasing!!
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  • From midnightsweet on November 21, 2010
    sweet, up date soon
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  • From katzeiason on November 21, 2010
    really great 2 chappie so can't wait to see how inu does with all those demon.
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  • From Vyper on November 21, 2010
    It is pretty cool that Jinenji sees Inuyasha as a younger brother. I find Sesshoumaru's actions toward Inuyasha to be almost cute since Sesshoumaru is just getting to know Inuyasha, but how will he react on Inuyasha's human night? That will be interesting.
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  • From ANON - river girl on November 20, 2010
    I have a soft spot for possive Sesshomoru. The twist on the perfect killer to healer and the Demon's Prince's own amusement was just...good. Definately. Love this chapter. Love our poor Horse Hanyou, heart of gold, truly! I'm still grinning. I am really glad that you're letting Inuyasha develope naturally, questioning the healer, testing to find the limits of his current situation. But now you have me really, really, curious about this latest developement. Who is Inuyasha's father? Why is he different? Hm.....

    I'm guessing that the younger state of Inuyasha's demon may have something to do with it? And you Sesshomoru mentioned court, the next day. Somehow I do not see that going over without incident! Whatever Sesshomoru thinks, or maybe he's just setting himself up to show off what's his. Will he be able to keep Inuyasha as mellow as he is now, or will culture shock set in? I mean, new city, demons, new food, well good food in this case, even though all the changes are for the good, how will Inuyasha adjust? Not knowing the rules, the social mores, is always the hardest part of adapting to a new place. And Inuyasha doesn't know the rules. He doesn't know how to be a demon, a free person, to even regularly speak up for himself. He's in culture shock even to himself. He could potentionally get out of bed and walk across the room without getting hit. What's that going to do to him?

    Whoops, my apologies if I'm sounding like a know it all. I've been through cultural shock in several different countries, languages and social circles. So I guess it stands out to me. Some take it better than others. Inuyasha definatley has a lot going for him with Sesshomoru looking after him.

    Please, please, next chapter! I'm still so hooked on this story. Thank you for writing.




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  • From trystkinkou on November 20, 2010
    *evil laughter* why does it seem that he is not half HUMAN and demon? *shakes head* must be my mind making troubles again. it'd be heck if he's actually part SERAPH and demon *snickers* would certainly account for his light. *sighs* but i know that is way off... hmm.. a priestess perchance his mother spotted him and brought tot he temple? ooohhhh i can't wait to see!!!
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  • From trystkinkou on November 20, 2010
    yay for sesshie getting inuyasha to claim himself! it's the first step in a very long and trying road. i can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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  • From ANON - T'Amara on November 20, 2010
    What a fabulous chapter! It's really wonderful to watch a non-bastardy Sess bringing this messed up ex-slave into the light of a whole new day, a whole new way of looking at himself and the world around him. Nice mix of tough-tender in the dialogue, too. And the universe itself, with demons who have packs and pack order but despise the concept of true slavery, very cool!
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on November 19, 2010
    This chapter was definitely a roller coaster for our poor Hanyou. He is in totally uncharted waters and doesn't know how to behave from one moment to the next. One almost feels sorry for his struggle to understand the basics of compassion. Lovely moment, though we really saw most of it from Sess's POV. I'd like to see Inuyasha's inner thoughts a little more as this is going on.

    Nicely done!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on November 19, 2010
    I totally agree it was an appropriate ending to the chapter indeed. I liked it very much especially with the sensitivity that Sesshomaru showed the young one which is right and appropriate with how he had been treated and abused most of his life. I was almost in tears with how lovely this chapter was I did giggle a little though when Sesshomaru referred to Jinenji and how upset he would be to find Inuyasha out of bed that was adorable and oh so true I can't wait for the next update though I gotta admit I do miss my updates on strength.
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  • From Vyper on November 19, 2010
    I am glad Sesshoumaru clarified that Mongrel business. Now all he has to do is get Inuyasha to open up to him and soon they will find love in each other. At least I hope they will damn it all.
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  • From ANON - angelsword on November 19, 2010
    By the way, I totally loved Pup, maybe we can meet shippo and rin as a playmate?
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